haiku 19 revised

dew drop
on the rose bud
a butterfly

OR

a butterfly
on the rose bud
dew drop

P.S. Using a pivot as a central line; the first line and the third line can swing off this pivotal central line.

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韩瑞雅 Han Rui Ya

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